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I Can Show You Pain :fruk sketch-wip:

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:iconreadplz: Even if there is quite a lot to read, I'd appreciate if you did.

Warning
The picture includes (rather obvious) hints of bondage, s&m and love between men. The warning is there, so if you don't feel comfortable with those, you don't have to look. It's not strict, because nothing actually happens, but the ideology is… powerful enough, I'd think.

If anyone however doesn't get nauseous or anything from looking at this, I would be ever so thankful if someone would provide me critics, tips, points out flatout mistakes and suggest ideas for the background. I'D LOVE YOU FOREVER. There are things I can't change anymore, like their poses and the whole chair (because then I should plainly draw a new picture and I'm not sure if I'm up to that much work), but I'd still like to hear opinions, I really want to be certain about this before I start inking it.

To :iconimprovement-club:: Hoping to find some feedback and corrections on the basic anatomy, male torso and the position of their feet, especially on Arthur/the short haired mister. Also tips with the background never hurt, but mainly the anatomy.

This picture origins from… I don't even know. -09 Christmas? That means three years ago. It was mostly drawn then, but when I found it again a few months at the end of summer, I did a few edits on it, changed the chair and their faces, also did the background. The idea came from Vari, and for whatever reason even I cannot understand, I decided to draw it (or it was ever so kindly "requested" by Vari herself. Can't remember which way it was).

This is a kind of picture I'd have never imagined drawing, but one thing that surprised me most was how I actually got the anatomy pretty well. Sure, mistakes are there, but considering those poses are how they were three years ago, I'd say that's not half bad. But still, yeah. While I never exactly drew bunnies and kittens before, I certainly don't usually draw… this, either.

Why am I uploading this here? Because I want to hear if this is ready enough to be inked. I don't know what to do to it myself anymore, I kinda feel like I'm done, so I want a second opinion. I'm scared to start inking this, because every time I plan to I get this horrible feeling I'll just ruin it. That's why I scanned the sketch, so if I do screw up, I have a back up and can finish it digitally. That's the last option though, and I really hope I could finish it traditionally.

Also to fellow FrUK fan(girl)s: Yes Arthur can be seme too he was a goddamn pirate after all : D Besides I personally adore seme!Arthur.

I apologize if anyone got any kind of traumas because of this. I also apologize for I accidentally Hetalia (again).

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"I would be ever so thankful if someone would provide me critics, tips, points out flatout mistakes and suggest ideas for the background. I'D LOVE YOU FOREVER. " Lähetä tää kuva tänne :iconimprovement-club: ni saat 80% varmuudella redlinet joltai kokeneelt artistilt tääl dAs:) Mä pyysin *Shattered-Earth:ia tekee mulle ja opin tosi paljon sen redlinesta>w> Grouppi tosin vaatii liittymisen ja siel on postausrajat kuukausille, mut on ne neuvot kyl sen arvosii:D Tuolta voit vielä lukee postaussäännöt [link]